小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇。

When I grow up,Iwant to be a successful business person.and than I can earn lots of money,I will have a better life with my mother and my father.Because we are very poor now, and my parents always work hard day and night for money,So my father's body is not heath ,He has to see the doctor and had spent more money ,and my mother got big pressure. So I have to study hard and become a business man for future.