小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

When I grow up,I want to be a successful business person.and than I can earn lots of money,I will have a better life with my mother and my father.Because we are very poor now, and my parents always work hard day and night for money,than my father got a sick,he has to see the doctor and had spent more money,and my mother got big pressure.So I have to study hard and become a business man for future.