句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强。
My favourite sport Football is my favourite sport. By chance I picked up a football when I backed home.I played it happily with my friends that I love football deeply. I often played and trained football with classmates. David Beckham is a famous football star who is my favourite football star and my dream is becoming a professoional football player like him.I can not wait to play football!