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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Today is Saturday, August.3rd, 2013. It is a busy day for me. In the morning, I got up early at 6'o clocks, and practiced my oral English in my room for thirty minutes.Then prepared for our breakfast, and helped mom with some housework, such as, cleaning the board, washing the window, make the room more tidy. After breakfast, I went to get my homework done. There were a lot of homework to do and some were extremely difficult for me, but I finished all in the end. In the afternoon, I went to play table tennis with Lee, who is my best friend.We enjoyed ourselves very much and have a happy afternoon in practice room. In the evening, I watched TV with my family, the program on TV was very wonderful,and then prepared my self for the next day's lesson. When I lay down on my bed, I felt comfortable this day and fell asleep quickly. Well, what a busy day today!
