文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用偏少。
Sam was got up at six'o clock last day,then he rode a bike to the park,he was pleasured.his both parents and he had a lunch in McDonald's.he was playing basketball from 4 pm till 6pm with his schoolmates.after dinner,Sam and his father go for a walk together and his father had bought a music CD for him.it was a good day!