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Sam get up at six yesterday, then he ride the bicycle to the park. He have fun in the park. He have lunch with his parents in MAC at noon. He play basketball with his classmates from four to six. After supper, sam gor for a walk with his father and his father send him a classmatic CD. How fun it is . Sam have a nice day.