句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at six'o clock yesterday and then he rode his bike to the park.He had a great time there.At noon he had lunch at McDonld's with his parents.In the afternoon,he as well as his classmates played basketball at school,and they didn't stop until six.After supper,Sam's father bought him a classical music CD when they went for a walk.How interesting a day Sam had!