运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;文中用词稍显贫乏,同时请注意单词拼写的检查;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
This is a really story description so mach.A poor man called herry who from THE US had a exciting trip. Once two richess have a bet, lenting a billon to the men about a mouth .They want to see herry hoe to do it.After a mouth.Their supriding. He is living and get the love of a woman.