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Tom's rules Tom is a student. he live his life regularly. Everyday, he get up at 6:00 and go to school at 6:15. Consdiering healthy, he don't eat outside. On school days, he not only listen to music but also watch TV. He always be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. Tom is a good boy.