希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Tom's rules Tom is a student. he lives his life regularly. Every day, he gets up at 6:00 and goes to school at 6:15. Considering healthy, he does not eat outside. On school days, he not only listens to music but also watches TV. He always be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. Tom is a good boy.