正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Tom's rules Tom is a student. he lives his life regularly. Every day, he gets up at 6:00 and goes to school at 6:15. Considering healthy, he does not eat outside. On school days, he not only listens to music but also watches TV. He is always back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. Tom is a good boy.