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We have all kinds of delicious dumplings at Laosi Dumpling House. Here, the dumplings are big and nice. Now we have two great specials. Special 1 has only vegetables and is just 2 yuan for 20. Special 2 has beef and vegetables and is just 5 yuan for 20. Welcome to our dumpling house. Our address is 234 Heping Avenue. Our telephone number is 0373-2256. Thank you for coming again