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Playing football is my favourite hobby. I falled in love with football by change.That is on my way home.I found a football,and i played it with my friend.At first,i just thought it is interesent.But then i became crazy about it. Sence then,l always practise piaying it and have rests on football with my friends. My favourite football star is Bancham.I want to be a professional football player in the future.