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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
We thank for you buy 100 boxes of shirts and we are very pleasure.But there are 2 pionts need to mind.Our company suggest using paper boxes instead wooden.Paper boxes have many advantages such as being good for environment and convient to move.You know that the probelm of environment is more and more serious .So it needs us to take some actions.The other reason is that deal with business is always using the smallest cost to get the biggest benifit.So we wish you to be able to take it . We once did it with a company from America and it was very successful. We are waiting for your answer.
