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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11494
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

As the passage suggests,close observation plays an important part in the process of our knowing the world. What's more,looking and listening matters as well. From my perspective, learning by doing is better for study than reading.The statements as follows are made to support my view. First and foremost, practise is essential in one's development. There is a famous saying in China that it is better to travel thousands of miles than thousands of books,which illustrates the importance of practise. We can experience something new and develop our ability by doing.Meanwhile, we can correct our mistakes and open up our minds. Second, learning by doing can make us master what we are learning in reality while learning by reading can't achieve that.Learning is one thing,doing is another.Only in the way of lerning by doing, will we develop our ability effectively. Last but not least, although doing is better,reading can't be neglected.We can gain rich knowledge from reading,which is beneficial for us.

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