文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文中从句数量过少;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
What an interesting day Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.he rode bicycle in the park,he played very happy. his father and he had lunch in Mcdonald's .Sam played basketball with his classmate from four a.m to six a.m at the school.After lunch,Sam and his father went for a walk,his father bought a classical CD. What an interesting day Sam is.