复杂句的使用不是很丰富;作者词汇表达丰富度不足,也请仔细检查文章的单词拼写;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
My busy day I got up early yesterday morning .after breakfast, I rode bike to company and arrived at eight o'clock in the morning. I checked and replied my eamil from 9:00-10:00 a.m.,I prepared test samples from 10:10-11:30 a.m, I had lunch from 11:30-12:30 . aftern luch ,I started to do samples test . it took 3hours to finish all test . I have a little rest until 16:30 p.m. then I prepared test report from 16:30-17:30p.m. I rode bike back home at 18:00 in the evening.