文中从句数量过少;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
My busy day I got up early yesterday morning.after breakfast,I rode bike to company and arrived at eight o'clock in the morning.I checked and replied my email from 9:00-10:00 a.m.,I prepared test samples from 10:10-11:30 a.m, I had lunch from 11:30-12:30.Aftern luch ,I started to do samples test.it took 3hours to finish all test.I have a little rest until 16:30 p.m. then I prepared test report from 16:30-17:30p.m. I rode bike back home at 18:00 in the evening.