单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My Net friend. He is a good man. Why? Because he is very funny,last year.He said he will go to New Orct City and he had gone two days ago. He gave me one box. He said he was a man who kill Sam.S.Worg . My god . What is he say? He is the man who kill Sam.S.Worg , this is very funny. Could you