七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。

Sam had a nice day in yesterday!He got up at six oclock.After ate the braskfast,he rode the cycle to the park and playde very happy.In the afternoon,he had a nice lunch in the MCDonal's with his perens.What's more,form 4'oclock to 6'oclock,he had playing basketball in the school with his schoolmates.Apart form these,he also went for a walk with his father in the evening.What's the most happy thing is that his father bought a new classical CD for him.What a nice day!