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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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文章衔接手法恰当;作者词汇表达较灵活,可是有些单词拼错了;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。

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Everything is imperfect,why we always pression because of some wrong thoughts.So i think there are no diffrences between rural and city.There are advantages in cities and there are advantages in rurals as well.From 1970s to now. Many people have to fight with diffcilties beacuase they just want a better life ,but where can they can achieve their dreams .The answer must be cities .And we'll old one day,at that time what we can live ?The answer is rurals.A saying said well and it was "Rural owns silence,city owns noise ;Rural owns poor,city owns rich."Some people like countryside lives ,perhaps they miss thier hometown ;Some people like city lives ,maybe they have lived in cities when they born.Everything is not we can prediect.So we just need to follow the style and not out of the style.there are one another reason is that some people hate city lives that are richer and elder,beacuse they have expreienced too much, they hate tires and pains and they want is slience.Perhaps some people think the air in rurals is better than in cities, they think the most important is health.Diffrent people have diffrent thoughts.it's the best what i thought.How about you?

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