2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。

Welcome to my hometown my best friend.let me intruduce about our interestingplace for you, Firt of all ,you should go to NanHu park ,you would better go in evenning.because it is more beautiful than day.There is a long river .it is very beauty when the light open in the evening.you should take your camera to take some picture. then there is a big lawn here if you feel tire you can take a rest or have a free talk with your freinds in there .NanHu realy is a good place worth you go