单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Tom made rules for himself. He must get up at 6:00 every morning.He must go to school at 6:15. He asks himself that he never eats any food outside and he doesn't listen to music on school days.He can't watch TV on school nights. Must be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening every day.