单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Tom made rules for himself. He must get up at 6:00 every morning.He must go to school at 6:15. He asks himself that he never eats any food outside and he doesn't listen to music on school days.He can't watch TV on school nights. Must be back home before 12:00 in the morning and before 9:20 in the evening every day.