托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

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In my eyes,the most significant thing of someone can succeed is honest and continuum.A saying says well ：If you try your best to do one thing,you won't be regret and the result won't be too bad.But you hardly ever do something for your wishes,the result must be terrible.So they are not sweety for our miracle.One point is honest,the other point is continuum.We have to depend on oursleves to change our denisty.There is a ordinary example to prove my opinion well.She is my household and she just have graduated from senior high school.At the first her scienice subjects are not good,but in order to get a good job in the furture,she have to choose science subjects.There is another one man that is my household as well,his science subjects are very good and he is very clever.But in the college entrance examination.The distance of their grades are not big.Just 6 marks.i got a sentence there that is if you never stops continuing, you have already succeeed half success.So buddies, come on ,don't give up your dreams.Because you are closing to success every day and only time troubles you.