但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. Then he rides his bicycle to the park. He's having a good time in the park. Noon and parents eat lunch at McDonald's.. Sam and his classmates in the school play basketball, from four pm until six pm. After dinner, Sam and his father took a walk together, his father bought him a classical music CD. How interesting the day Sam was!