复杂句采用很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒。
My monitor is a very kind person, one day she hept me to do duty, i was sick and very tied, she saw me and help me to do the preparation of clean, what a kind person she is , and then she become my best friend in the middle school, i wish our friendship could continue for ever