正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday morning. after that, he rode his bike to the park. He had great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from 4 to 6 with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought his a classical CD. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had!