七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中用词稍显贫乏；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday,than he rode his bike to the park,he had happy playing in the park,in the afternoon,he and his parents had dinner in the McDonald' ,and than he played basketball from four to six with his classmates in the afternoon It was relaxing.After dinner,Sam Went for a walk with his father.His father bought a classical music CD for him,His was very happy because he enjoys music very much what a happy day Sam had.