小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog named DuDu in my family. DuDu is 9 years old now. DuDu is very fat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. It always wears a white coat. My dog is both beautiful and smart. I like my dog very much. Do you like it?