文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;从句数量不足;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam gets up six clocks yesterday.secod,he get the bike to park. he very fun .At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had!