作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;从句使用量太少;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam gets up six clocks yesterday.secod,he gets the bike to park. he have a good time .At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had!