但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Sam gets up six clocks yesterday.though,he gets the bike to park. He has a good time . At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After super, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had!