湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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One possible version： Our Monitor I am a student in Yucai Junior High School. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is Liu Kai. He is 13 years old. Liu Kai is tall and strong. His hair is black and short. He has a round face with big eyes, a small nose and a wide mouth. Now he is in a white coat, blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. Liu Kai is my good friend. We like him very much.