七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

After getting up at 6:00 ,sam went to the park by bilke yesterday and had a great time.he and his parents had lunch in the McDonald's at noon.from 4:oo to 6:oo yesterday afternoon ,he had been playing basketball with his classmates at school. sam and his father went for a walk after dinner,and his father bought him a classic music CD . What an interesting day he had had.