七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段。

Sam got up at six yesterday morning.After that ,he rode his bike to the park,where he had a great time. At noon, he had lunch in the McDonald's with his parents . he played basketball with his classmates at school from four to six in the afternoon.He enjoyed it very much. After dinner ,he and his father went for a walk and his father bought him a classical CD.Sam was very happy, because he fancied music very much.what an interesting day he had.