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Tom's rules . Tom gets up at 6:00 every morning .After having breakfast,he goes to school at 6:15 by bus. he has never eat outside, because his mother tell he that the sold food is so bad .His father tell he than he must don't listen to music on school days and dont watch TV on school nights .However ,he goes back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening . That is so much rules for Tom !