小学英语一年级作文：Clocks

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

There are many clocks in the Brown's house. They are in different rooms. A big clock stands at a corner of the sitting room. It is a very, very old clock, but it still keeps good time. Mr. Brown winds it once a week.A small clock on the wall of the living room. It looks very modern, and you can hear the sounds of tick. And there is a clock which looks like a square.It is brown with white. It made of wood. It looks very beautiful in the bedroom. They also have many electronic-clocks. These all have various strange and beautiful surface. It has many kinds of colors. Everyone would like to have one of them as long as they come here.