作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文中从句的数量太少;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday , and then he went to the park by bike, he had a good time in park. At noon, his parents and he had lunch in McDonald's . His classmates and he played basketball from 4:00 p.m. till 6:00 p.m. in the school. After dinner his father bought a classic music CD for him. Sam had such a funny day today.