正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Introduce Myself My name is Ma Shunyi . I'm 14 years old. I'm in Class 1,Grade 7,in NO.123 Middle School. My English teacher is Miss yang. She is a nice woman. My best friend is Peter. He is a clever boy and I love him very much. I like swimming best. It can make me happy and give me a strong body.My favourite day is Sunday, because it's the first day of a week. This is me,a happy girl.