正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
My new friend I have a new friend. His name is Peter.He is13 years old and today is his birthday. His favourite colour is blue. He likes playing basketball best. He plays basketball after school every day.His favourite season is spring,because he likes flowers and flying kites. He's my best friend,I love him very much.