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初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:56浏览次数:2031
要求:
以“我的理想”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;全文结构较为严谨;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

My Dream Although I'm a jewellery salesman now.but I have a dream.that's to become a teacher.because the teacher can impart knowledge and affect the students. A good teacher is related to the child's future or even a life time. When children grow up to be the backbone of the country is like see the saplings grow into towering trees as the excitement and joy. At that time I will be proud to realize their own value. I will strive to become a good teacher, and find the best in each child, love all the children, let them become a good person, diligence, Thanksgiving, it takes a strong man, a confident person, polite person. Although this dream some distant, perhaps in a few years later, maybe after ten years, but I have been efforts to dream In addition, I have a dream that is throughout all the world, I also in hard for this dream. Come on

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