文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
Sam got up at six o'clock.Then he go to park by bicycle,he had a good time there. he had lunch in McDonald's at afternoon. he played bascketball with his mates from four o'clock to six in this afternoon. after dinner ,He went for a walk with his father,and his father bought a classical music CD for him. that's a funny day.