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Hi Gorge, Vert glad to have received letter from you. It's so great that you'll visit my homeland in the summer vocation. I'll provide you some basic information which you might need As for the expenditure of househould hotel, as I konw, it costs $30 dollars per day for sigle room . And 20 dollars per day for double room. Not only you can take a close look at Chinese family but also you can feel at home as well, Of course, you could cook by yourself. You also can bathe and swim in the sea, climb the hill , do some unpaid job in greenhouse if you would like to . I'm looking forward to your coming. See you soon, Yours, Lihua