但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。
Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. After that, he went to the park by bike,where he had great fun play in . At noon, he had lunch in McDonald’s with his parents. In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four till six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical music CD for him. He was very happy because he enjoys music very much. What a happy day Sam had!