作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
One possible version: Pen pal wanted Hello, my name is Lucy King. I’m from UK and I can speak English.I want a pan pal in China. I think China is a beautiful country. I’m 13 years old and I was born in December. I have a little dog whose name is Coco.I like playing basketball and listening to the music.On weekends, I often go to the camera with my parents. Please write and tell me about yourself.