文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Our eyes are very important.We can see beautiful things with our eyes.Without eyes the life will be pale.So we must protect our eyes. To protect our eyes,first thing is we shouldn't read too much.We must stop and take a break for a while to let our eyes have a rest.We can enjoy the hills,flowers,trees.Then we shouldn't read under the strong lights or weak lights.It's bad for our eyes.At last,we should keep doing the eye exercises. Let's protect our eyes,see more beautiful things.