正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I am a student from Yucai Junior High School. I'm in Class 2, Grade 7. Our monitor is Liu Kai. He is 13 years old. Liu Kai is tall and strong.He has short black hair.He has a pair of big dark eyes, a small nose and a wide mouth. Now he is in a white coat, a pair of blue pants and a pair of brown shoes. Liu Kai is my good friend. We like him very much.