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On Saturday, we went camping with our teachers.First of all we pitched the tent,then the older students played with us.At noon, we all had delicious lunch,and we had barbecue as dinner. At night, we sang and danced near the fire. We didn't sleep until 10:20 at night. But some of the boys were so noisy we couldn't fall asleep. I had been slept for three hours. Everybody woke up very early the next morning.After exercising,we all went to see the little pigs. On the way there, we saw a lot of geese. At 10:00, we went back to eat ice cream. It was so cold. then, we all played together. We had lunch at 12:00. In the afternoon, we played the musical instruments and sang. After that, camp was over. We had a lot of fun at the summer camp. I am looking forward to going to another summer camp soon.