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初一英语作文模拟题:夏令营

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:58浏览次数:1164
要求:
以“我的夏令营”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

On Saturday, we went camping with our teachers.First of all we pitched the tent,then the older students played with us.At noon, we all had delicious lunch,and we had barbecue as dinner. At night, we sang and danced near the fire. We didn't sleep until 10:20 at night. But some of the boys were so noisy we couldn't fall asleep. I had been slept for three hours. Everybody woke up very early the next morning.After exercising,we all went to see the little pigs. On the way there, we saw a lot of geese. At 10:00, we went back to eat ice cream. It was so cold. then, we all played together. We had lunch at 12:00. In the afternoon, we played the musical instruments and sang. After that, camp was over. We had a lot of fun at the summer camp. I am looking forward to going to another summer camp soon.

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