2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章衔接手法恰当；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错。

My hometown is Suzhou, Anhui Province. The most interesting place I will take him to see is WuLiu Area. WuLiu Area is a place with many tall trees and beautiful rivers, you can breathe fresh oxygen when you walk through it, and your mode will be better.The trees are planted on the hill. If you clim up the hill, you can see nearly a quarter of my hometown. There are lots of fish in the rivers, maybe you can go fishing if you like.